Category: Writers Block
Your beautiful strength
Is all I need to keep me afloat
You touched my heart with your hands ever so tenderly
Your song of love chimed in my ears giving me the promise of eternal bliss.
Your arms reflect the gentle light
your kiss is the everlasting angel of my love
desperation of the troubled waters calm me in the sweet sin
The sweetest sin that is you.
The leader of the sun cannot hold our love back with time, but instead it flows throughout our hearts like a river of rushing water.
No death of a rose can keep me from you
No charm can I never resist
The deepest part of our souls intertwined
As you and I declair what is ours
The devil himself cannot stop our fires which burnThe candles of our flame
No evil can leave us destroyed for our love is the kind goodness of our souls
As I reach for your hand, you hold me very close to you
reassuring me of your love and deepest desires
I cling to you like a rose that clings to her thornes
Never to break open with poisonous secrets of rage
instead I come to you completely and unrestrained
Your love is the gentleness of all things which are good
and when I become afraid I want to hide within myself
you hold me within your sweet grasp
whispering words of solitude
You shelter me from the rain and the storms while kissing all the fears to rest
Not even the birds of pray can take our love away
just the tenderness and feelings we will forever share
is all but one moment of silence
*sigh*
what does *sigh* mean?
I like it, there's something very rose-like about it, very long flowing complex lines, deep rich imagery. Not easily understood with the first read through. Good poem.
Very nicely written. Powerful!
Not bad, not bad at all.